Rating: ★★ 1/2
Synopsis: Tattoos once were an act of rebellion. Now they decide your destiny the moment the magical Ink settles under your skin. And in a world where Ink controls your fate, Caenum can’t escape soon enough. He is ready to run from his family, and his best friend Dreya, and the home he has known, just to have a chance at a choice.
But when he upsets the very Scribe scheduled to give him his Ink on his eighteenth birthday, he unwittingly sets in motion a series of events that sends the corrupt, magic-fearing government, The Citadel, after him and those he loves.
Now Caenum, Dreya, and their reluctant companion Kenzi must find their way to the Sanctuary, a secret town where those with the gift of magic are safe. Along the way, they learn the truth behind Ink, its dark origins, and why they are the only ones who can stop the Citadel.
Huge thank you to Bloomsbury and Netgalley for this ARC!
I am insanely torn on Inked by Eric Smith. I really enjoyed his non-fiction work, The Geek’s Guide to Dating, but this book took me so long to get through. When you read the blurb it has such a dynamic blurb, and yet when you read the book, it just doesn’t live up to the expectations that it boasts.
To be honest, Inked‘s premise was so promising and yet, I never felt entirely captured by it. I didn’t connect or care about the characters or Caenum’s overall cause. I feel like his rebellion came across more like a hissy fit and I suppose that is a valid response, but I just didn’t care. I didn’t care that he didn’t want to do it. I never got the sense from the book that the tattoos were evil or bad, so I didn’t feel like I cared about what Caenum’s deal was. The pacing was also weird, as I found I’d zoom through some bits, and struggle to turn pages the next. It felt all over the place.
I admit, the writing is decent (though there’s a few awkward sentences that made my eyebrow go up), but these characters just didn’t make me connect. I felt like I was trying too hard to like these characters, and the characters weren’t trying at all. There’s some moral issues that also become prevalent in the story, but it just resolves itself when it could have been a good opportunity for character growth. I think that’s ultimately what bugged me with the cast of this novel — there’s no growth. There’s no movement or change within them that gives you a sense that they are learning or understanding the world around them. I mean the world building is iffy at best, but more growth from the cast really would have benefited in the long run for this narrative.
At the end of the day, I wanted more, and I didn’t get it. The story felt flimsy a lot of the time, like it didn’t have a solid leg to stand on. That being said, when the action was on, it was actually pretty great and I found myself speeding through the novel. I think the ideas are really great, but the execution left a lot to be desired in some cases. I think there were just more misses in this book than hits, which is such a shame because I REALLY wanted to love this one.